please, correct my english?
Of all seven major islands of the Canary archipelago La Gomera is the one that preserves its customs and traditions of a purer form.Only in La Gomera you will be able to know the Silbo, a language with which long ago the gum trees were communicating whistling in the distances. Besides, spectacular traditional holidays of great flavor and a gastronomy riddled with the only elements wait for you in this agreeable island, for example the Potaje de Berros (Pottage of watercress) or Miel de Palma (the honey of palma), an exquisite delicacy elaborated from the guarapo (sugar-cane) juice name with which the sap of the palm is known
Example of Whistle: http://www.silbogomero.es/inicio.php
i am spanish
I have texts in Spanish and me it would like to be able to help to English tourists, it is not any in charge work.
my level of english is very basic and the english men do not understand my information 
Thanks to all
“of a purer form” is not correct.
“more purely” sounds better.
“to know the Silbo” is not correct.
“be able to hear Silbo” sounds better.
you need a comma between “communicating, whistling”
“in the distance” not “in the distances”
Don’t use Besides in the beginning of a sentence unless you’re arguing a point.
gastronomy should not be used in normal speech
delete the word only in front of elements
“on this wonderful island” not “in this agreeable island”
What language do you normally speak?
I think you’re trying to get too fancy.
Are you writing a report or for a travel brochure?
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